All Comments on 'Farrago'

You are always restrained with the spring is fully wound. One day the spring will uncoil like a whip ;-)

Good poem!

b'brig

deep issues of longing and written and formatted perfect...lovely words...bluerains

really well written,

enjoyed the read.

Thanks.

~ J

has been mentioned in todays reviews

I like your internal rhyming and use of alliteration. An all together satisfying read.

Tess

"you, who were immortal...an essence beyond time...rhyme to my reason...a forever, ever happy" as I suppose you cannot escape the feelings that stirred you to write this piece. Although I have enjoyed all the variety of topics and formats with which you have pleasured our site, I do especially like this type, K. An absolutely beautifully expressed, heart poured out poem <smile>

Vixxx

Filled with feelings

Of emptiness and loss...

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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5, you are good with repeating sounds, but "you, who" begins to sound funny.