All Comments on 'fatwa'

Hot... great style and once again love the stopping and voyeurism of the moment

du lac~

Your poem was mentioned in Monday's New Poems Reviews.

but heat rises sharply in this poem of impending eroticism. You have a way of getting to the point in few, but powerful words lately, K. And as much as I enjoy your "flavorful" mode of poetry, this style leaves Me drooling in a different way <wink>. This was sensuous!

Vixxx

OK, not expected, works 5