by MzFly
"Fleeting Moments" - I really love this one!
Thank You!
HotSexyLesbian: Toula.
What an TALENTED poet. I do not usually read poetry, unless i need to express myself when i am unable to do so verbally, but this poem, simply takes my breath away. Awesome!
** I LOVE IT **
Beautiful words that "Answer some questions we were never meant to ask"
Thanks for setting a lovely tune in my heart for the rest of my day.
Doc
rhythm, pacing and rhyme are really well done, a lot of really good lines in this that portray the thoughts of those moments,
the first stanza is rocking and sets the tone and pace
thoroughly enjoyed this