All Comments on 'Floral Scene'

For a first erotic poem, this is quite nice. Your descriptions were very suggestive, pretty, yet gentle, just like I would like them to be if I were the one you wrote this for. Lucky the lady you did write it for!

Patty

Thought this poem was pretty erotic. Made me think, especially the language of views of various aspects of a flower. If you will, it made my flower spasm as I read it.

Jenny