All Comments on 'Floral Scene'

Thought this poem was pretty erotic. Made me think, especially the language of views of various aspects of a flower. If you will, it made my flower spasm as I read it.

Jenny

For a first erotic poem, this is quite nice. Your descriptions were very suggestive, pretty, yet gentle, just like I would like them to be if I were the one you wrote this for. Lucky the lady you did write it for!

Patty