All Comments on 'Footfalls in the snow'

Weird, idiosyncratic layout, but this could just be your style and that's cool. I love this poem. The imagery gave me shivers and I loved it. I got a sense of snow, then warm and I loved it. I am puting this one in new reccomendation thread.

What a perfect title for your poem, as I can just hear (and see) the soft impressions made as each step brings him closer to that cozy, welcoming embrace of home.

"The light in (from) the window plays hide and seek with the trees."

I love the imagery here!

"The snow splinters...drifts...and swirls as the door opens."

Wonderful writing... splinters is a perfect word choice! Makes me smile.

"And the snow refills the footsteps... in the woods..."

He's home now and settled in it seems. I love a wonderful last line in a poem and yours is just that.

Thank you for sharing this.

*softsmile*