All Comments on 'For the angel I desire'

a really good poem and I felt the emotions that spawned this poem, thanks for the read

You capture the moment quite well and manage to say all you need to. It will be lovely to see how your own voice grows as your verse developes with more writing.

Thankyou.

Welcome to Lit

With this well crafted piece;

Imagery solid and haunting...

Thanks so much for such kind comments everyone <3

I have no idea how someone could come up with such a haunting poem. It sent shivers down my spine. In a good way!

Hopefully you will come out with more poems. Five isn't enough!