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by Du Lac
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Anonymousover 19 years agoBittersweet excursion into Time's trickery...
The last line is particularly strong. Please do note that the possessive "its" requires no apostrophe (damn the schoolmarm in me--apologies!).
Christina O. Leighover 19 years ago......
::Sniffles::
Forever? What's that?
Oh, how I know this feeling....if ONLY...
I should harden my heart!
Good work!
WickedEveover 19 years ago~
Your poem is mentioned on the new poems review thread on the poetry board.
*No thermometer rating
My Erotic Tailover 19 years agofor---ever~
some really good lines...swimming in her eyes...awesome!
snow balls into a powerful poem!
sackover 19 years agothe imagery is quite strong....
"Let the warmth of our joined hands...." is a line that will resonate long in the memory. Bravo!
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