All Comments on 'forgiveness'

by seranade

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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I was eight days without electricity <--YIKES! Not fun!

Good poem. A little bumpy here and there, but I definitely enjoyed the little bit of humor you added to this piece. I had a chuckle in a few areas. Poor thing at the same time. Thanks for the read.

Du LacDu Lacover 19 years ago
Your a hoot!

Very visual and I wanted to be right there with you lol.. laughed and felt the snow dance on the mountain tops of my nip....? lol.. had fun with this one.. good write and healthy belly laugh

thank you for the read..

Du~

Ninja NookieNinja Nookieover 19 years ago
nice poem Alby~

doesn't sound like mother nature

forgave ya! <grin> cute poem and

a touch of reality, excellent!

LiarLiarover 19 years ago
Review...

Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poem thread at the poetry board.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
cute

and yes, winter is a bitch.

window seal (sill)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Amazingly true

It's happened to all of us.

Anonymous
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