All Comments on 'Four Days'

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TeeTeeTeeTeeover 17 years ago
Oh so steamy!!!

Sensually touches the core...perfect!

enjoyed the read thank you for sharing

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 17 years ago
Yumm !

Love the sexual feel to this one. A lil steam goes a lonng way eh ~ Sounds like someone had one heck of a time.

I kinda tripped on the word bruise. So much heat can lead to bruising just felt it was not needed here, maybe a differ word. I know I am being nit picky eh ~ Sorry for that. Loved the urgency and steam ~

More please~

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