Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'freezerburn'

by princess rayann

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 2 Comments
foehnfoehnabout 19 years ago
Nice use of metaphor

Good clarity and unity, very good poem. I just wasn't sure of "spirals," and then "beat" as a dropping of temperature... Those questions didn't bother me much, as everything else was so crystal-clear. Thanks.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
mention

your poem was mentioned on the thread

'NEW POEMS REVIEWS'

Thanks for the Journey~

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login