All Comments on 'French Polish'

"Making me vulnerable

where I used to be robust

Caressing the shine

Until I'm his mirror"

This says so very much. Eloquence abounds, love. I may be off but it screams to me... "Shape me! You've made me who I am."

Great work.

What vella said. :D

~Imp

Caressing the shine

until I'm his mirror

I liked it even more the on the second read.

shine does indeed take a little work and finesse, but when done just right, leaves us glowing and open!

Making me vulnerable

where I used to be robust

Caressing the shine

Until I'm his mirror

Love this stanza - reflected lust...who's reflecting whom?

Great work! Thanks, LJ.