All Comments on 'Full Moon'

...prose than poetry but some interesting directions. Just a teeny bit cliche'd.

Tess

does not HOWL, i.e. if you take the stock image, don't run it though the same way. A4

i like the idea of this poem. i think i'd tweak it a bit... use different turns of phrase to make it more poetic. but then, perhaps the differences in:

ten p.m.,

10:02

(either 10:00 and 10:02 or, ten p.m. and ten o two p.m.)

and

tugging at the heart strings of man,

and women

(either man and woman or, men and women)

are poetically quirky in their own right.