All Comments on 'Give and Take'

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Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Powerful

Erotic and angry at the same time,

I liked it though.

Thanks,

~ Jenn

rikaaimrikaaimabout 18 years ago
Wow!

This was simply amazing. I read it once over with a pounding force that drives and commands. The format is strong, fast, direct. The words are torn. They want one thing, press for one thing, but they seem to desire another, a struggle for realse. Once again I am impressed. You never cease to amaze. I love the format.

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