All Comments on 'Growing Old'

to disagree?

but I do, EOL bothers me here

by, of, either standard, or double unstressed

by any

touch

as Fridayam does

what am i missing?, subtlety?

I fived, although it looks like a walk through

...in these stanzas. Such stark, beautifully expressed truth!

fine words. Thank you.

and the best of the day too - well done. Sweet O.

instead of drastic change for new fads, TK U MLJ LV NV

This is well done, and I'm not saying that because I'm getting old. Scratch that. I am old, at least compared to most Literotica readers.

The style reminded me of William Carlos Williams. The line breaks worked well, although I confess to some mixed feelings about hypenated word enjambment, but that may just be old-fashioned me.