by MinorMonster
Great pace, images, language use. I really meant it when I said your poems are a joy to read--even when the subject is less than joyful as is the case in this thought-provoking poem.
Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum.
....that only Ange and I left comments here, I hope more came by and voted generously. I love the cadence of MM's words and the picture so skillfully painted. This poem beautifully conveys the wide spaces and small world of a child.
Tess