All Comments on 'Growing up on a plain'

by MinorMonster

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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 16 years ago
How sad......

....that only Ange and I left comments here, I hope more came by and voted generously. I love the cadence of MM's words and the picture so skillfully painted. This poem beautifully conveys the wide spaces and small world of a child.

Tess

AngelineAngelineover 16 years ago
This is excellent writing!

Great pace, images, language use. I really meant it when I said your poems are a joy to read--even when the subject is less than joyful as is the case in this thought-provoking poem.

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum.

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