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typo: throgh

shellchock? shellshock? typo or I just don't get it? Unless it's like shell and chocked full put together to resemble shellshock but a shellshock that's chocked full. Honestly, I'm putting too much effort into this word. :)

Anyway, the poem is chocked full of unique phrases. Maybe too much of a good thing? But still good.

shellchock, comparision of the news with the game? Reference to the band? Agree with Eve, unique phrases.