All Comments on 'Half-Full of Love/Un Verre de Amor'

You rock, blending metaphor, sound, visuals and truly erotic! 5 freaking stars!!!!

Beautiful..

In the new poems review thread

Remarkable poem. I'm glad Todski recommended it. I might not have read it otherwise due to busy busy other stuff going on. It was well worth the visit. You set the table in the first stanza, and everything flowed so well thereafter. Pardon what sounds like a pun.

I do agree with your reply to tod and think you might want to pare it back a couple of stanzas. I felt some redundancy creeping in. Nonetheless, this was a thoroughly enjoyable read. I hope you'll submit more.