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by simply__me

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WillowedCabinWillowedCabinalmost 13 years ago
I think this is still

way to wordy and the rhythm is off. However, the ideas in here are much more original than your other works. Also, the second stanza should just be cut out completely or reworked; it's too wordy, too hackneyed.

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