All Comments on 'History'

are the spaces supposed to be like that? I want to go back and read this, a lot of cool images, like the white plastic bag floating... but the spacing was distracting for me. Did you do it for a reason, I would love to know, I might go Ah HA! and look at it differently. I should spend more time with this poem. It is definately worth it. I will try. :)

somehow lurking there, something you can't seem to shake. I like the suspense you create with your breaks within the lines, the stilted read emphasizing that despite the resolve that things are over, something keeps sneaking in. Well done.

jim : )

this is too much, agree with Jim, I may have stronger feelings about it then he does.

"pastern" I'll accept that, whoa

Much more than 100