by TeeTee
you've submitted, i can see how writing is starting to come into the picture of things. i like this too. i think you could look to others on this though. the phrase of "like a thief" could be considered overused. but in this case it may be just fine. i didn't see any others that popped up.......don
descriptive wording
loved the mystery
behind this.
Very good!
Thanks
~ J