All Comments on 'Hyperventilating'

But it is the kind of hurt that is so wonderful.

nothing better than a huge belly laugh.. the kind that makes you cry.. beg for air.. making all your muscles sore. loved it

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we would want to see what the laughter was all about. It does leave a feeling of "missing the joke". Very Good.

has been reviewed in the New Poems thread at the porty forum.

best kinda laughter there is!

very nice!

oh I know exactly what you mean!

reading the short quick lines matched the title, kinda felt like the poem itself was hyperventialating. Very good work!