All Comments on 'I Ain't Asking For Much'

is like a tampon at times

I Ain't Asking For Much

just might be nice if I saw susansnow leave some comments on others, instead of word salads in tow.

didn't vote

Well, as a busy professional, sometimes all I can do is a word salad to express how I really feel. I'm sorry that you want something more from me...

I like to approach language in a fighting stance, knives drawn and ready. I think it is a writer's responsibility to demand more from language. To tests the limits of propriety and make the words succumb to you. I want to bend language inside out and create trails of word and meaning that when leaving the tip of your tongue, rolls off like grape jam and toast. If you don't like what I've prepped and served, don't take seconds. Thank you for your comments.

I like your word salads. They are...spiked.

But I agree with what I think 1201 is saying - this one doesn't hold together. The culprit is the void void void. I think if you eliminate that line, it's stronger. Just my two cents.

I don’t know about word salads but I sympathize very much with the feelings expressed in your piece.

I certainly agree with your view on language usage.

but the other side, coffee is more than a dime and BS is not gratis, TK U MLJ LV NV