All Comments on 'I Didn't Mean to Break Your Heart'

I mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. The 50% rating is so that it will not affect other 50% temp ratings. Please come along to the Poetry Forum and join in with other poets. - wildsweetone

I can't really tell what your intention is here: which is something that I like. The poem reads as a collection of lame break up excuses, unthought out and casually spiteful. And on that level it works: it is a mini-compendium in how to be unloveable. I think you've captured this shallowness perfectly.