All Comments on 'I miss you'

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aySolitary1964aySolitary1964about 7 years ago
Lovely

You are talented... this was beautiful and glorious...

Please write more.

HERdirtylilgirl3943HERdirtylilgirl3943about 10 years ago
Made me wet...then sad :(

Beautifully written! I felt the end deeply, my beautiful girl left me a little over a month ago...OK fine. One month, three days, and five hours ago. The silence is fucking deafening...i'm miserable. Like you, i wonder why, why i wasn't good enough? What did i do wrong, did i love her too much? Why she wouldn't fight for us?!?! :( Being sad SUCKS! :(

Love and Peace to you my dear, thanks for the validation. :)

GianettaGianettaover 12 years ago
exquisitely sad

But what a glorious sadness

wrighterwrighterabout 15 years ago
I might miss u

Amazing, And the beauty is i might be goiing to remember this poem, if i dont end up with someone. Hope i Dont.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
The rating...

speaks for itself.

tafxkztafxkzover 15 years ago
Lovely- Thanks for posting

I love it- it puts my own missings at ease, it that makes sense

Psy_ChicPsy_Chicover 17 years ago
Very Sensual!

I really enjoyed this poem; was thinking how it 'tugged at me'... right up until the questions at the bottom, and then it sort of lost the flow - lost me. The poem itself is excellent though!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Miss

After more than 60 years of life you have made me realize that I have missed something pretty special.

It isn't because I haven't tried, because I have.

It isn't because I haven't cared, because I have and I do.

But for all my trying and caring, nobody will miss me in that special way that you miss your lover.

I wonder if he will wake up and realize what he is missing...........Terry

HornypakiHornypakiover 18 years ago
Beautiful

You have a talent for saying what many cannot say.

You reach the centre of things in a gentle way and though some words convey lust alone, the love still shines through

TrollyTrollyalmost 19 years ago
From Under the Bridge

After seeing so much crap on this site, it's nice to finally find something good. Thank you.

DexicreonDexicreonabout 19 years ago
Nice . . . very nice

such a sensual poem, good imagery.

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