by Fantasy Kiss
You are talented... this was beautiful and glorious...
Please write more.
Beautifully written! I felt the end deeply, my beautiful girl left me a little over a month ago...OK fine. One month, three days, and five hours ago. The silence is fucking deafening...i'm miserable. Like you, i wonder why, why i wasn't good enough? What did i do wrong, did i love her too much? Why she wouldn't fight for us?!?! :( Being sad SUCKS! :(
Love and Peace to you my dear, thanks for the validation. :)
Amazing, And the beauty is i might be goiing to remember this poem, if i dont end up with someone. Hope i Dont.
I love it- it puts my own missings at ease, it that makes sense
I really enjoyed this poem; was thinking how it 'tugged at me'... right up until the questions at the bottom, and then it sort of lost the flow - lost me. The poem itself is excellent though!
After more than 60 years of life you have made me realize that I have missed something pretty special.
It isn't because I haven't tried, because I have.
It isn't because I haven't cared, because I have and I do.
But for all my trying and caring, nobody will miss me in that special way that you miss your lover.
I wonder if he will wake up and realize what he is missing...........Terry
You have a talent for saying what many cannot say.
You reach the centre of things in a gentle way and though some words convey lust alone, the love still shines through
After seeing so much crap on this site, it's nice to finally find something good. Thank you.