by Awesomejoe
I loved reading every bit of it. Great work and kudos to the author!! Made my day!
The poem was too long and repetitive, uninteresting also imitative of too many similar bits of writing.
I'm a regular reader on Literotica, and I must say, this is one of the most impressive poems I have come across. I'm more of a story person than a poem person, but this poem is a hell of a lot better than a lot of stories I've come across on this site and others! Keep up the good work!!
A man who likes to share all the private details of his erotic activity. Quite graphic.
Animal lust between two human lovers at its best! I am going to send this one to my girlfriend.
The beauty and sensuality of what you've composed is magnificent. I was so Impressed by the inherent passion and hot lust....yet sincere expression of a deeply spirited union of love. Damn....I'm in awe...that was amazing. It took my breathe away. Keep it up!!
MMMM so yummy...I'm wet..need more! Great poem/shortie-loved it much *kiss*
thats what its like when youre in love. even when youre apart from the other person, they make your heart race, and you know you do the same to them. anyways, this is like a story my man told me once. good work.
r.
i found myself drawn into the story, wanting to know what else he fantasized about. he obviously knows a womans desires and finds a perfect medium to express his fantasy of a woman who is very powerful indeed.
yes, yes, yes!!! oh! sorry, was reading ur poem and dayyyumn, man, u r good! the poem's wonderful 2! ;-) after reading this, i feel i must go ravage my man and with any luck, his friend 2. :-) in all due respect, u really put the reader in the moment, i almost smelled the sex. damn good poem.
Your poem was mentioned on the thread
"New Poem Reviews"
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