All Comments on 'I See Your Face'

by classyman1938

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YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
I see

What could be an above average Literotica erotic poem

is reduced in stature by changes in rhyme scheme and falters in meter.

The poem would be better if the read was smoother.

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