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by KISAPrince
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erectus123almost 11 years agoI love fairies, all kinds! a few minor comments, hopefully constructive
where,sweet romance= no need for comma after where
human kind=humankind
use of semicolons is ok, but a comma might work as well, also you don't need periods to end a verse, as it is a poem. Just a suggestion; carry on as you wish.
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