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An interesting reflexion, Steve, but I can feel a greater poem just struggling to get out.

in this poem--the little strophes are stacked thin like the layers described by the content. Maybe another poem could expand the idea--but small and terse is right for this one, imo. :)

as is I think, and I have ofetn wondered the same thing, maybe too often! :)