All Comments on 'In the Mood'

"as you give me brain" is a nice turn, it usually means to give head, i.e. fellatio, but here I take it to mean cunnilingus. Yes, loveless sex is good when the other is not available. Nice angry poem, go for it!

when we would all get naked and fuck. Could we cuddle afterwards?

Roses are red

Violets are blue

Feelings are messy

Let's just screw!

what caught my eye:

I don't want to share

I want all the attention on me

now the poem, say what you want and get the fuck out, a little more edit, chop. think it though, now do these two lines fit the tone?

I want you to test me, trust I do

Believe me I won't leave your balls blue

why are they there?

...that feeling.