In the Spring

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HarryHill
HarryHill
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Hey, Bud-dy,
let's spend the morning together
while the parchment of the day
unfolds.
Hopefully,
there will be no wrinkles,
Coffee?

Look there,
where the vapors of the fog
fall apart, like rotten cloth,
far beyond mending.
Beautiful, eh?

See the moss valanced pond
spill from the tattered mist
emerging from cover
to reveal the kiss of fish
and nymph
What? Go fishing?
Sure.

HarryHill
HarryHill
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demure101demure101about 11 years ago
Good imagery,

good poem - seemingly off-hand... Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
*****

There are some really good parts to this one, and some parts I'd change, but I think I should leave it at that.

Five.

erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
nice lines

i'd cut the last two but i understand why you kept them

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerabout 11 years ago

I liked this, but I think "Coffee" in the first stanza was superfluous when the warmth of friendship had a greater affect later in the poem.

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
Nice time hangin' out with ya'

Buddy ! Time well spent .

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