All Comments on 'intercourse, a la mode'

That made me hungry lol

What a treat ;-)

This is so awesome! Great poem. Best I've seen in a long time.

This is full of ripe sensual imagery--it's a poem you can feel in your senses. I keep wanting to put a period after "bees" and capitalize "Those," but it can be read both ways--bees fallen at the end of summer or fallen fruit. That's a good thing. :)

sensual, and the imagery...off the charts.

~your ripened speech attracting bees

those not yet fallen, fruited words

descend toward crumbled, graham ground.~

That's Nice

Great work.

YumM... I'm thinking this delish piece should've been in erotic category as you've got me all hot for apple pie ;)

some very rich imagery / short and very sweet /

i could eat this poem.

This poem tumbled right off my tongue, and I tasted every decadent word! Aside from the richness in flavor, the rhythm is incredibly fluid. The only thing I would tweak, is the commas at the end of lines. Yhe line breaks imply pause, so the commas aren't needed. This was anything but non-erotic poetry. I like that it was extremely erotic without being overtly sexual. Proves erotica isn't synonymous with trashy.