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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Beautiful

inevitable. it will be and little you can do about it feeling, for me, was very strong. beautifully done...

wistfully,

v~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
*

Good job, Imp! I like it... very much. Thanks.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
I wish...

this was mine:

Tomorrow

stalks us

sleek and hungry

and hot

Jennifer CJennifer Cabout 19 years ago
I

Liked this one alot Imp, especially the last few lines, really well done!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
mentioned

your poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the journey

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Thought provoking.

Clearly shows that we are all powerless againt the passing of time. Nicely told!

lindianalindianaabout 19 years ago
Excellence

Passionate prose, filled with the need to warn and explain. Urgency written within, making it a fast read.

Absolutely marvelous. Thank you.

sacksackabout 19 years ago
"Impressive"

As is everything by this author....I am speechless!

angelicminxangelicminxabout 19 years ago
My feelings exactly...

...captured completely in your powerful use of language!

Shadowskill KnightShadowskill Knightabout 19 years ago
Wonderful

That was simply wonderful. Beautiful use of language and style. Very impressive, Imp!!!

entitledentitledabout 19 years ago
Wow.

i'm usually not a big fan of poetry, but this one is wonderful. It gave me the feeling of being stalked by something large and... not necessarily cruel, but ruthless.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
tomorrow

Well captured Imp, the dangers and frustrations of possiblities. "Potential" may well be the world's most complicated curse word. Many layers in this work.

sophia janesophia janeabout 19 years ago
beautiful

You have a way with words that I envy! Another excellent piece!

sexmatesexmateabout 19 years ago
Interesting

Never thought of it like that. Hmmmmmmmmm.

Goldie MunroGoldie Munroabout 19 years ago
Whew!!

Powerful stuff! Beautifully written.

ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEabout 19 years ago
This is soooooooooo......

Not crapola. It's reeks of truths.

LadyJeanneLadyJeanneabout 19 years ago
Your poetry

is devastating in its perfection. And addicting... Thank you, Imp. LJ.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wow!

Hot and tasty. Great writing.

Syn

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
It came...

...and I couldn't find my cave.

ty,bd

sassynycsassynycabout 16 years ago
your name says it all.........

you are so very impressive...your phrasing...your wit....

you make words a living entity

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
IT COMES AT SUNSET

awaiting the morn on the eastern horizon. TK U MLJ LV NV

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