All Comments on 'Jack-off Junkie'

*fanning myself* mmmmmmmm well done! :)

The first stanza is good and original but the subsequent ones digress badly. Look at you writing in the first and work on bring the rest up to that standard. There should be no lazy or unnecessary words in poetry.

I didn't like your poem. It was more of a note talking about j/o than a poem. The ones who said it was good are barely poets themselves. Try harder.