All Comments on 'Just'

Your poem has no pretense--it's articulate, yes, and I like the "I'm not going to be a poet now" refrain (a great contradiction since you're saying it in a poem!). Thing is, it's utterly honest without being crude and that, in my opinion, elevates it over the countless other poems on this subject posted here. Really well done. :)

seem to have a wonderful grasp of conveying feeling without the clutter of too many words. I like your style and your descriptions :)

the raw force of this poem drives it. Pure lust... Normally I don't associate cock and cum with erotic poetry, but it works here. Well done.

Just raw sex written with great spacing.

But I liked it.

LOVED THIS! Thanks for the pure, raw sex poetry.