All Comments on 'Just For One Moment'

You're quickly becoming a favorite of mine...there is just so much passion and emotion in what you write...the person for whom you write for must be incredibly special to you.

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I liked the story and what you said. <br>

The only thing that I recommend,<br>

is a better eb-n-flow to the,<br>

poem your giving by this sea.

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Very nice though :)