by 1Kiki
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I liked the story and what you said. <br>
The only thing that I recommend,<br>
is a better eb-n-flow to the,<br>
poem your giving by this sea.
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Very nice though :)
You're quickly becoming a favorite of mine...there is just so much passion and emotion in what you write...the person for whom you write for must be incredibly special to you.