by goliathtamer
Felt, really felt, your desire, your lust, your rut. I was right there in your body being done by as well as doing. Give us more, hot, hard and often.
I loved it...you hit my sometimes mood right on the head...terrific work!
Way to go, poet! In a few verses, you told quite a tale.
I want more!!!MORE!!!!Don't stop...This poem will keep me coming back to read here on Literotica.
"A rip roaring read" The New York Times.
"Fuck Harry Potter" The San Francisco Chronicle.
"I read so hard the cum hit the headboard" Timothy Leary. ....
Seriously this shit is poison to the thoughts of a virtuous man ...the kind of poetry that makes u wish that the whole world understood the joys of submission just so they could really know what being fucked is all about ....
The short phrases give a kind of 'list' effect which really complements the theme of this poem. Love it.
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