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by SweetOblivion

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerabout 11 years ago

Nicely done, how you used one word to change the whole flavor (pardon the pun) of the poem.

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
Cute....

......and I laughed too.... Always fun to learn a new word and read a good poem... Thanks again for sharing...QQ

HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
cute

and funny ...ends well 5

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