by Randi Grail
I really like this.
~and you will in parallel
grow wild with renegade roses
rising among fragrances
richer than fiction spawned
from untended seeds ~
That's a great finish
Nice work
Thank you
a neat combination of lecture and poem! I could use a lecture on gardening...
A well used metaphor
grown with interesting phrases,
and alliteration watered.
Good phrases such as:
"marvel instead of meddle"
"renegade roses"
when i think about your age, i'm amazed at the depth you have..
this was totally a joy to read.
xo