by Raven_of_the_Morning
the title in itself is a sort of poetry. I love the concept and the images are really good :)
.....an easy read but worth the effort. One of two poems from a new arrival. Nice work.
5
sacrifice/salvation imagery going on here....some nice original metaphors...
Would have given it a perfect, but the line "Fierce demon of the air am I" doesn't fit with the rest of the work in my opinion. The rest is magnificant. A work worthy of praise.