All Comments on 'Lilith Contemplating th Razor Blade'

by Raven_of_the_Morning

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Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
well now

the title in itself is a sort of poetry. I love the concept and the images are really good :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
This is not.......

.....an easy read but worth the effort. One of two poems from a new arrival. Nice work.

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tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
I like the

sacrifice/salvation imagery going on here....some nice original metaphors...

lostandfounderlostandfounderover 19 years ago
Great poem

Would have given it a perfect, but the line "Fierce demon of the air am I" doesn't fit with the rest of the work in my opinion. The rest is magnificant. A work worthy of praise.

tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in Sunday's new poem reviews

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