All Comments on 'Longing'

Of deep feeling emotion in this one baby. Well written. though knowing the background behind this, I have a better understanding than most. Still...the imagery, impact is extremely well done and thought provoking. Love you "My Anna"

Don't know the 'background story' but I can clearly see the dichotomy between the way things are and the way you wish they'd be. The title here is so appropriate...

It's the way I feel when my boyfriend's not near---you feel incomplete & just want him there to make you feel whole and happy again.

for you now have what will inspire you the most: his love. Although I know the meaning behind this poem and the dramatic and somber time frame from which it stems, I hear the awakening of renewed lust for life toward the end of this piece. From the heart wrenching, "tears nearer than laughter ever was" to the final line of spirit and strength, I am sure...

Yes,anna~ just watch you dance! <hugs>

Vixxx

and yet so much hope. You have an amazing way with words, you make me feel like I am staring right into your naked beautiful fucking soul, and I cried.