All Comments on 'Love's Garden'

This is really nice - I'm not sure about "oozing" but that's just me. You have some lovely alliteration and imagery. Well done!

Tess

This is nice. Your writing is growing. :)

and nice flow all the way through. nicely done.....don

babygirl! I told you you could do it... keep going cuz you're really starting to shine!!

just for fun, try some form stuff. you might surprise yourself!

Boo

Great descriptive writing

once again, you never forget

to describe how something

feels, looks or tastes,

I love that about your writing!

~ Jenn

I see the garden. <grin>

A nice counter-point

to verse earlier read,

imparting feelings, describing feelings

but thankfully not speaking feelings names

thanks for the gift........