All Comments on 'March'

This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>

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To me March seemed always more prone to be like the Bi Polar type. If any thing I'd say April is the one which could fall more easily prey into delusions of grandeur, hearing all sorts of voices and such... But be it as it May (oops... did i say May already), I am with you on your claim that all sorts of bounty hunters should better be advised to postpone their adventures way away from anywhere close to nasty dates such as the ides of march, safely into somewhere around mid April…

from you. I love the way you stretch sentences across lines, which gives such a great flow to this form. I sense though that you have a bunch of unnecesaary words that you fit in there to meet the ten-count of syllables for each line. That's always the challenge with a sonnet, imo, can you meet the requirements of the form without jamming extra words in to get the meter right. Sometimes it works beautifully, sometimes less so. The only way (again imo) to get it right more often than not is to keep writing them. :-)

from you. I love the way you stretch sentences across lines, which gives such a great flow to this form. I sense though that you have a bunch of unnecesaary words that you fit in there to meet the ten-count of syllables for each line. That's always the challenge with a sonnet, imo, can you meet the requirements of the form without jamming extra words in to get the meter right. Sometimes it works beautifully, sometimes less so. The only way (again imo) to get it right more often than not is to keep writing them. :-)