All Comments on 'Marking Time'

Companionship needs to be enough, for its own sake, not a constant party. I love how you describe the atmosphere and draw parallels to living inside a short vignette. This poem mentioned on the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum.

I was so grooving on the first stanza - then I read "Me either." and almost fell from my chair! Love this piece!

Love the "me either" line and "trying to recapture those summer nights. And the mornings after." Good poem!

oh man is that an accurate piece. Immensely well done, even if it did mess with my head. Anyone in a long term relationship knows this sensation.