by UnderYourSpell
has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!
(Should that "Where" be "Were"? Looks like maybe it should--but either way, it's lovely Annie)
Don't tell us anymore that you can't write poetry. Au Contraire!! This is absolutely beautiful, a bit sad and wistful, but it moved me. Really moved me. See my today's 30/30.
It pulled hard at my heart; I won't discuss it. Wonderfully done (meaning so effective without being overdone.)Enough said.
You should definitely write more of this kind of poetry -- wistful and lovely.