by UnderYourSpell
You should definitely write more of this kind of poetry -- wistful and lovely.
It pulled hard at my heart; I won't discuss it. Wonderfully done (meaning so effective without being overdone.)Enough said.
Don't tell us anymore that you can't write poetry. Au Contraire!! This is absolutely beautiful, a bit sad and wistful, but it moved me. Really moved me. See my today's 30/30.
has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!
(Should that "Where" be "Were"? Looks like maybe it should--but either way, it's lovely Annie)