All Comments on 'Memories Of Yesteryear'

This was so touching and reminded me of my grandmother

Many have seen their senior loved ones in a similar position.

This is a sad, but good tribute to long love lost.

However, I think it might be improved poetically by breaking it into stanzas and keeping the A-B - A-B rhyme scheme throughout the poem.

The eighth through twelfth lines in particular weaken the flow of the work.

Seniors and anyone with seniors should appreciate the sentiment of this poem.

Thank you for expressing what so many must feel.