All Comments on 'Mesmer.Eyez'

Tsk, tsk; getting lost in those blue eyes may be hazardous to your self-control.

Those 'diamond glints of soul' will get you lost at sea every time.

how refreshing in the dead dead of winter

to have the sweet taste of a delicious peach

rolling on tongue wave lip tip cresting

drifting back to a moonlight beach

Beautiful images! Everything works even though it's a pretty abstract piece on the power of eyes. Love "diamond glints of soul." Great line breaks, too. :)

Kick-ass title, I'm sucker for them and instantly open them up to see what's inside. I like this poem there are some pretty mesmerizing lines in here with a clear theme of imagery carried from stanza to stanza. However, one stanza seems to need a little attention so that it is more clear and that is the third one with the imagery of the willows. While it's lovely, there is doesn't seem to be an element that compliments it in order for the whole piece to read more cohesive to me, though, thank you for submitting it, it's a beautiful poem nonetheless.

This blue eyed blonde was completely swept away!